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 | THE COLOR GRAY | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.10 | May 11, 2012 |
Summary:Something different for me. I don't take enough chances and sometimes even though one may fall flat on his or her face .. we must stretch..
I understand each line in a very personal way but it may not come through as I hope it will.
As I said.. different for me. It is not about depression!!!!Chapters: |
 | Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
 | Return To October | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 11 | 0.12 | Apr 7, 2011 |
Summary:An attempt at Tanka .. Simply piece of poetry with using only thirty one syllables.. in a certain sequence 5..7..5..7..7
October is such a treasure. One of my favorite months as each day is a Van Gogh painting.
Afraid of review poetry? Easy! What emotion did it evoke.Chapters: |
 | Professor Richardson | a.y.anouchi | Short Story | Historical Fiction | 7 | 0.12 | Dec 18, 2010 |
Summary:A 200 word version of an anecdote.
Born and raised in Haifa. His British English was problematic in Cambridge, Massachusets.
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 | untitled # 63 | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 7 | 0.28 | Jun 29, 2010 |
Summary:one from the notebook, only a couple years old. comments welcome.Chapters: |
 | Poetic Dance | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.20 | Apr 18, 2010 |
Summary:How a poet see Spring. Looking at nature with a writer's heart. Listening to your creative muse... your own Echo..
Getting in touch with life..Chapters: |
 | The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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