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 | Fool's Paradise (2) | edwaed shafik | Novel | Thrillers | 5 | n/a | Apr 12, 2012 |
Summary:The chase and executing of Bin Laden.Chapters: |
 | The Legend of Draconis Book I--King Satin's Realm | Janet Taylor-Perry | Novel | Fantasy | 5 | n/a | Dec 27, 2011 |
Summary:Aidan O’Rourke never dreams that talking to old Diggory Danaher will take him on an adventure of a lifetime. After months of stories about a mythical island and his father, Aidan decides to find out for himself if his father is alive and living as a panther on the mythical island.
Stowaway wives, a lost father, bewitched human beings, a wicked witch, pirates, and friendly dragons combine to draw Aidan into a web of intrigue of good versus evil as he becomes the champion of a land that only exceptional men can reach. Aidan proves how exceptional he truly is through the power of faith and unconditional love.
Set between sixteenth century Ireland and a timeless, mythical island kingdom called Draconis, King Satin’s Realm relates the saga of four generations of the O’Rourke family as they battle evil in a strange world after finding it in turmoil. The O’Rourkes seem to be called to this enchanted world to be its champions. However, not even a place of such mystery can quell the wanderlust born in the O’Rourke family.
Feedback on dialogue, character development, readability, description, and appeal to the audience. Yes, the word is SATIN. I can spell; it is not Satan. This story is as much family saga as fantasy, but there is no family saga categoryChapters: |
 | Homegrown Healer (Revised) | Janet Taylor-Perry | Novel | Literary Fiction | 2 | n/a | Oct 26, 2011 |
Summary:“Physician, heal thyself,” are words Doctor MacKenzie “Mac” Reardon never thought he would hear although he has seen far too much sickness and death in his thirty years on Earth. The small isolated town of Possum Holler, West Virginia, has suffered numerous tragedies without a doctor and with a hospital that is nearly one hundred miles away. The people are poor and backward. At last, one of their own has managed to become a doctor.
Doctor Reardon returns to his hometown to find his own heartache might be something no medicine can heal as he struggles with a narrow-minded community, ignorance, a rocky marriage to a city girl, Felicia Chambry Reardon, and an overwhelming attraction to the new school teacher/principal, Sunny Bankston, at the newly established school. Having met Sunny while in his ER rotation at Cook County Hospital when he was an intern and her having been shot in a school-violence incident, Mac knows the spirit of the woman, a spirit that is more akin to his than the spirit of the woman he married. Mac struggles against overwhelming odds to bring his community into the twenty-first century even as Sunny Bankston battles her own demons, including fighting an attraction to Dr. MacKenzie Reardon.
This is a romance that is a bit different. Yes, there is romance of the man/woman kind, but there is also love of community and friendship, driving forces of the story. I want the reader to see growth and change in these characters. I do not want the reader to hate any of them. The main antagonist is a situation of poverty and ignorance, not an individual.
All comments welcome.Chapters: |
 | Windswept . . . | radley | Novel | Non-Fiction | 5 | n/a | Oct 10, 2011 |
Summary:This is a story about the time in March 2007 that four tornadoes converged on my parent's farm and the destruction, devastation, trauma, loss, and sorrow it brought to our family. It is also about the sense of hope, help, growth, triumph, strength, family, friends, faith, and community that came along with it. There's even a weird sort of humor thrown in here and there . . . I hope you enjoy it. Unfortunately, due to the number of natural disasters we have going on in our country (and the world over)in recent years, it is a story we share with too many others . . .Chapters: |
 | A History of Religion | jpb2ndchance | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.57 | Sep 21, 2011 |
Summary:While considering things spiritual I looked up the dates of origin of the religions of the world and the dates when variations on those religions occurred. Interesting stuff. I though about a poem which incorporated that information but after a couple pages I decided that it was boring as the Congressional Record. So this poem came to mind and it seemed to fit the existing title. Comments welcome.Chapters: |
 | Nine | jaksnipe | Poetry | Poetry | 6 | 0.88 | Jun 24, 2011 |
Summary:why do bad things happen? Nine, of course!Chapters: |
 | A January Rose | Unbar | Novel | Young Adult | 7 | n/a | Jun 3, 2011 |
Summary:Rose Schneider's quiet world is shattered one summer day when a friend rapes her. Discovering she is pregnant, Rose runs away to Chicago in an attempt to escape her small-town fate. A story of love and pain, set in the 1980's, it combines romance, drama, suspense, faith....all the stuff I love to read about myself!
I'd love to get feedback on my voice, since it is in first person. The main character is 17 when the story starts, but is retelling it from an adult perspective. I'd like the book to appeal to young adults as well as adults. Descriptive words of your take on the "feel" of this novel would be much appreciated, ie., boring, mysterious, exciting, whatever....tell me what you really think while still being polite. Also, I reciprocate reviews for those who review my work. Thanks and enjoy!
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 | Chameleon | Hanna James | Short Story | Young Adult | 5 | 0.46 | May 29, 2011 |
Summary:would you keep reading? any comments/criticism welcomeChapters: |
 | Why God? Edited January 27, 2009 | Dur Shacho | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 1 | 1.91 | Dec 26, 2010 |
Summary:This work is an attempt to explore the emotions and questions that arise from human tragedy. It raises the questions, but not the answers. While the questions raised are specific to a situation, similar questions are eventually asked by all. //God is defined in the broadest sense--and I hope it causes thoughtful introspection only. There is also a bit of "Eastern Philosophy" in this, as we are all affected by our experiences--and I spent 19 years in Japan and four of my seven children were born there.// A thought to consider; mustn't God loves us all?(regardless of our specific religion, or lack thereof). This is the first in a the first in a series of poems designed to provoke thought. Chapters: |
 | A Samurai's suicide poem--part of my novel Executive Samurai | Dur Shacho | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 2 | 0.83 | Dec 26, 2010 |
Summary:This suicide poem of a Samurai is an attempt to underscore the cultural differences between western culture and eastern culture. The west is largely Christian. In Japan Christians amount to less than 3%. The culture is largely agnostic--Buddhism and Shintoism are the primary 'religions' although they are more philosophies than religions.//Imagine not believing in a supreme being and contemplating the end of your life as an absolute ending, by your own hand?//This poem is the creation of the author's imagination and is not at all authentic. I'm not Japanese but I've lived in Japan for nineteen years over a thirty five year period from the mid fifties to the late eighties. I graduated from a Japanese grade school in 1964.//The Japanese have a deep sense of honor. They are particularly sensitive to anything that reflects negatively on themselves, their family or their company. Most suicides in Japan are over issues of honor.//Personally, I'll never forget receiving a hand delivered wedding invitation on Monday, only to have it have it retrieved the following Monday, because the father of the bride opposed the marriage, and executed his wife, son and daughter with a Samurai sword, and then took his own life. The groom was the President of a large Japanese distribution company.//This poem, and many other cultural differences and nuances, are what inspired me to write the novel Executive Samurai. Chapters: |
 | The Our Father--in todays language for teenagers | Dur Shacho | Short Story | Editorial and Opinion | 3 | 1.15 | Aug 15, 2010 |
Summary:I have edited this piece to include some helpful comments from reviewers. This is solely my opinion. I do not pretend to be an expert in religions. I do however have some experience in teaching CCD and in raising seven children. My hope is that this work may cause reflection and discussion. Assuming one accepts God exists, then there can only be one.Chapters: |
 | Why Trust is Important | Jackie Madden Haugh | Short Story | Other | 5 | 0.69 | Jun 30, 2010 |
Summary:Trust is that one element that glues all aspects of our lives together. It's not just the trust we place in others, but the trust we have in ourselves that completes us.Chapters: |
 | The Shroud | vsworld | Poetry | Poetry | 1 | 2.09 | Dec 24, 2009 |
Summary:Another Christmas time posting to get the mind working, especialy with all the new conspiracy theory developments.Da Vinci, Illuminati, etc. Peace. Z Chapters: |
 | God Asks Us, Why? edited 10/02/2009 | Dur Shacho | Poetry | Poetry | 3 | 1.11 | Oct 7, 2009 |
Summary:This work is a response to "Why God?". A poem in which a young widow, with a child who's husband was killed in Iraq, challenges God and bares her soul. It is important to read "Why God?" first, to put this response into context. By no means does the author attempt any more than consolidating answers throughout history to mankind's tragedies. Chapters: |
 | California Days With Mama Part 1 | Buffalotales | Short Story | Memoir | 3 | 0.12 | Aug 31, 2009 |
Summary:Raised dirt poor, mama was determined her girls grow up educated and cultured. My parents made their way to Southern California before the Great Depression. Through determination and sacrifice, mama gave her girls the knowledge and tools they needed to earn lifelong admiration and respect. These stories are for her.
All feedback very welcomeChapters: |
 | Unanswerable questions explored-edited Jan. 26, 2008 | Dur Shacho | Poetry | Religion and Spirituality | 2 | 1.39 | Jan 27, 2008 |
Summary:This piece is only an attempt to explore some of the continuing, unanswerable questions that face mankind. The stated answers are only intended to cause the reader to think. Obviously these questions have faced mankind since conscience thought became possible. Chapters: |