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Just thinking, always in my head events that I see the what the world used to be. It's this simply what comes into my head I write on paper.

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This is more of a freeing of one's soul Not sure regarding formal format or allowing it to simply go where it wants to go. Perhaps it is simply a gift to me as a writer... to just let the words flow freely, with no rules holding me back... no particular audience to please... just one soul putting into words her experiences... Any feedback.. It may ramble a bit but I think that would be appropriate ate times. These are thoughts in verses.

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This is just a piece for all who have moments of separation from hope. If you have read and reviewed this.. I just want to know if format better. comment in forum ... The format was not like my own work so I finally went back and reformatted in to verses and changed a few simple words. I tried to single space it but it still appears double? Does the double spacing hurt it? Again ... if you have reviewed this before. Just leave comment in forum. We have so many new members that I would love to have feedback from some of them. This most likely will be the first piece I 'send out' haaaaaa... I know! I am such a wimp! I don't even care if I get rejected so why the fear? Just me!

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This rewrite is trying to put what I 'think' I have learned to work. About the time I think "I've got it" I realized through others... Not quite Flo! But you getting closer.

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This is a poem about how we control our own feelings,

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Just expressing that helpless feeling when you know a soul is in peril and there is nothing you can do to help? We can all help those we know or give to organizations but once in awhile I feel the pull of a one soul so very far away, Most likely my imagination but maybe not. Maybe just a symbol of many I cannot reach nor help. Any and all feedback welcomed.

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A simple experience I had this morning. Paying close attention to what I saw and how I reacted inwardly. I do a lot of this lately and I feel it enriches writing. Any and all feedback ... mostly the emotional impact

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This is a poem about a person who is facing a choice....

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This is just a combination of thoughts. Of memories that have in ways dictated who I am and how I perceive the world I live in. Memories or glimpses I remember. Not sure this is poetry or just sheer release of long held emotions

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Any and all feedback is desired. Those who fight reviewing poetry it is simply 'what is felt reading the words' 'what visions flash?' That simple. If none? That is also a legitimate review. Poetry will not affect all the same nor reach deep enough to enjoy. I write whatever comes to me. Sometimes sad and deep while other times silly nonsensical dribble! This is a subject that has haunted me since small as while never 'starving' I did know hunger and painful pangs of it. While we spend fortunes to kill we allow hunger to spread and diabolical horror on those without protection. While some can emotionally tuck these images in a mental drawer this writer can't. Empty eyes scream hopelessness.

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This work is from the novel, Corporate Samurai "love begets hate, trust begets betrayal, lust leads to death". It attempts to convey the emotions and thoughts, in song form, of a woman Samurai to the one true love of her life--who is also a Samurai. This song is written at a time when she suspects their relationship will not be sustainable, as her lover comes from a much inferior heritage than her own--something her family will not accept.

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This will take more work to perfect. It is rather 'unfinished?' Can mean many things and about many people who have touched my life. It is actually about a real garden or a blend of gardens. My grandmothers and the movie the Secret Garden. Both touched me in ways I shall be forever changed by. Any and all feedback.

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Haiku nature solitary figure night seventeen syllables total

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A simple quick gathering of thoughts and flowing words. That's it folks! Any and all feedback.

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This is a simple piece inspired by the TITLE of a song written by my singer/songwriter son Brad. Rework it as felt is terribly lacking and cliche. This piece is meaningful to me so any help is much appreciated. Point out cliches... where you grimace! ha. Is it better? Much appreciation

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Does duty preclude a young girl coming of age? Where is the line drawn between common sense and public opinion? Feedback welcome

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It has to do with feelings and the pain they cause us. It's quite abstract, yet symbolic. I'm not sure what the title should be. You can suggest something if you feel you might have an idea. thanks for reading :D

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Any and all feedback welcome as still working on cadence and technical aspects. Are feelings stirred? Memories provoked? Want my work to reach deep into the well of your emotions and hopefully bring up a full pail of feelings.

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This is just something I thought about this morning that I wanted to express and get other's opinions on.

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