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Honest comments always appreciated!

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Something I've been kicking around for a while... not sure if it works, or if it's compelling, but I thought I'd give it a try. Honest comments always appreciated!

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I'm resubmitting this story because I'd like a little feedback before entering it in a contest. I've added a bit more in order to flesh it out some. Any and all feedback is much appreciated. Thanks.

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I had a dream and it turned into this story. Please give any and all feedback. Thank you for reading.

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The story is true, if embellished.

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Aw the freedom of dorm life

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Life brings different experiences to all of us. In response to S. Thatcher's 'A Word Substitute for Endless', this short story shows another aspect of how writing affects us and those close to us .

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Everybody has a mother. Some people don't deserve them - or do they? All feedback welcome.

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An old goat crops a garden.

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A man refuses to take blame for a series of strange events. Addendum: if you are reading the story on or after February 22nd, I revised the ending. Happy reading!

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History repeats itself as an army officer makes his last stand. This is a revision of my original flash fiction story. I have tried to add material suggested by my reviewers. But, remember - I only have 500 words! (I think I used 496). Thanks for looking!

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I've had the idea for this story in my head for a long time, so I thought I'd give it a shot for the flash fiction contest. It's an epistolary about the effects that can arise from changing a simple prescription .

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Honest comments always appreciated.

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A little flash in the pan

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History repeats itself. In a future battle, Custer makes his last stand. Flash fiction contest entry. Comments and suggestions are appreciated.

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Okay, this is my last entry for the flash fiction contest. I have to stop because it's becoming addictive. Let me know what you think.

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I've applied almost all feedback I've gotten. Thank you! If you're the type that reads the feedback below before you read the story, I'd recommend against it as much of it no longer applies (as the feedback has been applied). Did the twist work? Any feedback appreciated. *****SPOILER ALERT***** Rod is a ghost... Thanks Justin

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observations from someplace unimportant

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~~Words scribbled on paper~~I've taken out the summary information. I want to know if this piece can stand alone. Thank you for all your comments. Ask me anything :)

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This is my latest revision of my flash fiction contest entry. An agent races to defuse a bioterrorist bomb located in the Bonneville Salt Flats just north of a landmark named the Tree of Life. The Tree of Life is a real metal sculpture. To see a photo of it, Google Tree of Life/Wendover. Thanks for reviewing the story. All comments are appreciated.

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The navies' of several countries are unable to stop Somali pirates. Ralph tries to change that.

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Ali goes to the circus.

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Observations from someplace unimportant

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brothers

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Ali keeps askin' questions... Thanks for the inspiration, sonny.

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Feedback Please

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This is my first foray into flash fiction, so any comments are welcome.

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I apologize in advance.

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Marisa is being released from prison and wants her kids back from her aunt. Although she isn't prepared or ready for them, she wants them. True to form, her fellow inmates attempt to stall her release to keep her kids safe.

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Anecdotal Flash from the past

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dedicated to the 'devil dogs' of World War II

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When two worlds collide.

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411 words - funny? is it flash fiction? - does it capture the flavor of New York?

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The pollutants of industry produce dire consequences, especially when manufacturing designer genes. This is a horror story. If insects make you feel too creepy, you might want to "bug out" of this one.

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speaks for itself

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500 words

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For grins I've attempted to cut over 500 words from a story I wrote to see if the meaning would still be clear. This shorter version takes a bit more imagination from the reader. I get it, but I wonder if anyone else does?

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Spring break, in the Redneck Riviera, is like a horse race.

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That Look

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EDITED BASED ON FEEDBACK RECEIVED. THANKS ALL - AND I HOPE YOU JUDGE IT TO BE BETTER. CHISEL

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Rememberences of the sea shore

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Written for a flash contest. I think the story had to be romantic, less than 500 words, and a bridge had to be mentioned. Any sort of comment is welcome.

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I revised The Tree of Death after receiving feedback from reviewers. Thanks to everyone who read the original and offered their comments. The setting of the story is a real place located a few miles outside of Wendover, Nevada. You can google the Tree of Life/Wendover/Salt Flats to see a photograph of the metal sculpture. Story description: An agent races against time to deactivate a bomb.

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The navies' of several countries are unable to stop Somali pirates. Ralph trys to change that.

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Uncle Fred finds himself unable to perform an important function soon after marrying Emma Lou, who is forty-six years younger than him.

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Making adjustments in life in 498 words is not easy.

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The story of a breakup. Please let me know what you think.

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Old prejudice

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Surgery and punctuation? Who woulda thunk?

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A nasty little foursome have their eyes to the main chance! After all, if you don't look after your own interests, who will?

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Any and all feedback desired and appreciated. Jonathan was an odd man. His decision to enter a very strange contest was his undoing. It was, indeed, a very poor choice.

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Ever have a relative who is difficult to live with? My life with Maria has been difficult at times but we've reach the stage where peace reigns.

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The title says it all. Periplaneta americana anyone?

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This is my entry for the Flash Fiction Contest. My grandfather told me this story back in the early 1960s and swears it's true. I have my doubts about that! Grandpa had been known to embellish more than a little bit! He's the boy in the story. Any and all ll feedback is welcome. Good luck to everyone. Alan

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This is an entry for the flash fiction writing competition. The setting of the story is a real place located a few miles outside of Wendover, Nevada. You can google the Tree of Life/Wendover/Salt Flats to see a photograph of the metal sculpture. Story description: An agent races against time to fulfill his mission. All feedback and comments welcomed.

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75 words!

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Feedback please

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A look dark in to the room and mind of a man on a stormy night.

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Part of the comedy of my life on our way from Colorado to my aunt's funeral in Missouri.

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Observations from someplace unimportant

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