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A story about love, loss, death and damnation. I have revised this entirely with many of the altercations recommended by those who have already reviewed it. I would very much like some fresh feedback.

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Halloween story about four friends and a stranger.

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Becky has a strange and unexpected Halloween, causing her to question her sanity. (Submitted for entry in Halloween Story contest but open to any and all feedback.)

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Young women are being killed in Miami, Florida.

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Observations from someplace unimportant.

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A girl goes missing on Halloween and an unfortunate police officer finds her.

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"Fasten your seatbelt, it's going to be a bumpy ride."--Eve

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In death, a woman feels compelled to visit her ex-boyfriend each Halloween. However, this year her visit will be the last. // All nits welcomed. I'm interested in knowing what you think of the ending. Thanks for reading. 09/28/2010 - Revised to try to give an indication of the MC's intentions a little earlier in the story. This has been the main complain, but I don't want to give away too much. I hope this is enough.

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Has the Devil incarnate come to rusticate in the idyllic town of Timberland and bargain for a few souls or is he just a religious nut (in a wierd getup making his home inside an abandoned church) who imagines himself to be a dark god?

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A Halloween night at the ER.

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Hi! This was a originally a much longer story. It was very hard to get it down to this size. I got the idea after reading a blurb about Samhain and then I saw a movie. You'll probably figure it which one. It's about a Halloween that changed everything. And I mean everything. Thanks for reading! Any and all comments are very appreciated.

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This is my entry for the Halloween contest. Any tricks or treats are appreciated. There are some purposeful tense changes - does it work/flow? There is also an occasional "artistry" with a words usage - does it detract? Does the backstory work in establishing the story without dragging it down? Any transitional shortcomings? Anything which might improve the storyline or presentation. Thanks. Take care. Vern

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Hope you enjoy it.

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This is the story of a writer with major block. He gets help from the netherworld. But the cost proves to be too high... Any and all comments are welcome.

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This is the revised version. Thanks to everyone who helped me along the way. I welcome any comments or suggestions.

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This is the ligther side of Halloween. All comments are welcome.

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This is pretty stupid: Go back to the Seventies and imagine a small group of nerdy nine year old D&D nerds in shitty plastic masks about to set out for trick or treats under the guidance of an avuncular old foul-mouthed and grumpy alcoholic Irish immigrant... The ending sort of sucks, but what are you gonna do? The conversation could go on forever going nowhere. :) *Just for clarity* One DASH = Uncle Kevin. Two DASHES = one of the costumed kids.

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graveyard

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A young vampire serves a cantakerous master who is bent on destroying all of mankind...

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