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Any feedback would be appreciated and welcomed.

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This novel is set in a remote indigenous mining town in Cape York Australia. The book is a coming of age story about a young women, Sam Tucker, and her friends based on actual events. For Sam's 18th birthday, rather than another backyard party gatecrashed by others, she convinces her closest friends to going camping on the bank of a wild river and the events that unfold change their lives forever. I wanted it to be based around characters that secondary students (13 - 18) could relate to and with action and adventure that would be interesting and leave them wanting to know more. I've never written anything before. My recent addiction to blogging sparked an interest in writing and a sense of purpose(http:/cassielobley@blogspot.com) I found this site to be be a fantastic avenue to learn and mature my literary skills. All feedback - absolutely everything - would be greatly appreciated. Don't hold back.

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My take on a Faustian short story that I wrote for a little girl who loves fairy tales. This is my first installment in a series of short stories I am writing. I would like to publish this story in some sort of short story collection or anthology, along with the other short stories I'm writing, either with other authors or by myself. So let me know if anyone else is interested in doing something like that.

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Good at Dying A look through the gauzy curtain Blue Rubians hang between love and their other appetites...

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Kelly had put herself on the auction block but when her boss starts bidding on her, what's a woman to do? Any feedback would be helpful. I'm kind of new to short fiction. Thanks for the feedback, it's been very helpful. This story's a work in progress so I appreciate it.

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I fell off a 60 foot cliff 11 years ago while hiking alone in the rain forest with my dogs. My back/nerves were never right after that fall. Thank God for modern medicine and a great wife.

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I'd almost forgotten about this flash fiction and then came across a competition which it might suit. I've tinkered with it just a little, re-named it and wondered if someone could please take a look at it before it's launched into polite society.

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Companion poem to previous submission.

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Its all about this Shadow King.. something like a vampire or similar dark being. He's not ashamed of what or who he is. I do have other dark pieces as well. I consider this a lighter writing as I have written far more visceral imagery in the past.

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I said I'd take a break and just review, but I couldn't help it. I was experimenting, playing around with this form. It's that common rut that a person in love (lust?) falls into-- everyone but you can see what a loser your lover is, and can't figure why you don't leave the jerk already. A little addiction, perhaps? I was having a conversation with a friend who was telling me about his latest crush, and I just got to thinking about all the people, and all the relationship woes of unevenly matched pairs. **26 Aug 08:I'm fiercely holding on to the repetitions, because I believe they are essential to the slightly crazed, deeply addicted feel. What I missed though, in the original version, was the breaks between the stanzas. Pehaps this may alleviate (some of) that rushing, confusing, dizzying look of the poem. If not, then it's not meant to be a pantoum-- I'll pare it down.

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I'm interested lately in doing strong brief pieces. Yet, does this stand on its own? Would you change anything? This is on the edge of erotic so I'm warning you now. It doesn't cross over but it is close.

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There are things that lose their appeal in the harsh light of day. Or at least after the edge on the lust has subsided.

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A handsome male professional and his bosomy client; an infatuation, a refutation, a confrontation and a condemnation.

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.....pucker up!!

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