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The chase and executing of Bin Laden.

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Cleaning up the garden after winter damage brings on thoughts of past experience under a willow tree Does this poem make you think of similar events/

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OKAY.. If you have read or reviewed this.. I am not asking for reviews.. I just read it for some reason and laughed at some of my first offerings. Especially this summary! haaaaa have no writing education beyond (highschool)so know I have so much to learn. Especially regarding (puncuation) haaaaaaaaaaa......aaaaagggghhhhh I blame it on two head injuries but it has always been difficult for me. Content I always got praise.. received the (hightes) haaaaa of praise. Just be gentle as I am fragile.... only kidding! My work is about myself as a child and how I feel about other children with similar childhoods. Hopefully it touches those who feel unheard or seen I did touch it up a bit but have no illusions anymore regarding the work this needs. I will work on format later but not up to trying to figure it out Any suggestions on that though sure would be appreciate. I am not sure what to even classify this as anymore.. Lord, I thought I was sooooooooooo good when I wrote this! :) Sorry, but got the giggles! haaaaaaaaaa...

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Short story about an adult man reflecting back over a very personal evening in his youth that changed the dynamics of his small family on the reservation.

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this in lieu of the one I pulled as humor doesn't feel right from me today. This is one I wrote for my grandchildren so not something deep but feel it worthwhile to get feedback on as why settle for 'ordinary' when it can be much better with feedback etc. Cute is fine but also want a message?

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This letter recently came into my possession. I hope you enjoy.

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Any and all feedback wanted. I honestly don't know what this is. I always have a down day on Dec 3rd.. Simple as that. Not meant to be sad but to show the soul and the human realty that we sometimes struggle. No rhyme nor reason.. This one is just for me to unwind a bit.

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Finally, a chapter in the life of Alphonse (Al) Bonet that is more than a vignette, but a full-blown chapter. Following the death of their mother, Al and his younger brother, Guillaume (Willie) Bonet, travel to South Carolina to live with their father, a career Navy Chief Petty Officer.

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Some days you have only yesterdays

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This isn't just for poets as I am not just a poet but a writer. One who hopes to first graduate form poetry school to short story to novella to .... ???? This is for all writers who have that nagging little muse that simply won't let you rest until you write something or polish off a bottle of wine! Any and all feedback... Cliches?

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True memories or just a dream? Hints from her mother, suffering from Alzheimer's, gives Sybil a clue to her past as a dream collides with her reality. Any comments and nits are welcome. Thank you!

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Rough draft of serious entry for contest. Posting it as will force me to work on it and I don't have to chance of losing it again. Any and all feedback is always welcomed.

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What would you see?

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THERE IS SIMPLY NO WAY FOR A CIVILIAN TO GO INSIDE A MILITARY MAN OR WOMAN. IT IS ONLY POSSIBLE THEY GAIN SOME INSIGHT FROM WHAT THEY HAVE SEEN AND HEARD FROM THOSE WHO CAME HOME AND USE HER OWN IMAGINATION OF IMAGES SHE HAS SEEN . NO INTENT OF HARM MEANT TO ANY WHO SERVED IN ANY CONFLICT. NOT MEANT FOR THAT AS MUCH BETTER SUITED WRITERS ON BOARD TO DO THAT. I AM NOT WRITING ABOUT HOW SOME CHILD MIGHT HAVE A BOG PUSHED UP HER VAGINA OR ANUS. THIS IS PURELY ON HUMAN OBSERVATIONS FROM AFAR. NO I CANNOT PUT ON A UNIFORM BUT I HAVE LISTEN TO MANY HOW HAVE. IT IS A POEM NOT A CONDEMNATION OF ANY SOLDIER MARINE, NAVY OR ANY OTHER BREED OF FIGHTING MEN OR WOMEN IT IS A POEM

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I just had my grandmother's old Gruen watch repaired as the main spring broke so many years ago I can't remember. She was my port in the storm so to speak. I will wear the watch when I want to be near her. No sure regarding punctuation ... To go all the way through with it or leave it as is. It simply isn't meant to read too formally.

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Odin Roark has written many poems about his experiences with city life in recent months. And as always with Odin's work one is prompted to some personal reflection. And my mental meanderings after reading his poems set me to thinking about some of the cities I have known and experienced. These three little poems are the result of that thinking. Thank you Odin. Comments welcome.

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Thank you for reading this poem about one of my themes... please feel free to say whatever... what works, what doesn't.

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It's strange what we keep, what we remember, the two seldom reconcilable. Have you ever had your whole world-view rocked by an old photograph that suggested (or maybe proved) your memory is a lie? Just don't add up proper, does it? your comments are most welcome.

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INSOMNIA MOSTLY... sometimes we unwittingly allow ourselves to become vulnerable by the words of others and it can dredge up old wounds... Having said that, insomnia also plays a role so no pity party for my entering a ring of discussion and opinions.. Not a child but ... these words were born and that is what I do, take the crap and write a poem.. good or bad! I have a hunch more than myself have had a night or two like this

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I do not want this to be corny so be very hard on me. This is a theme I tend to write a lot on and I truly don't know why. I am haunted by the pain our vets have suffered down through all the wars. I have witnessed the destruction of families and friends trying to understand what they cannot nor will they ever be able to.

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I have no poem for Fathers Day and had no Father for this day so will share what I have seen through others Fathers. Okay.. Have been getting pressure to write! I say I can't unless the words simply come. This most likely will sound trite and song like. In a way it is meant to sound that way. Not trite! But like a song It is a simple piece about a father who cannot give his family much. Out of work etc.. But he realizes he can bring his boy joy if only for awhile

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This has been rewritten, as I really had to agree with the critiques given, thank you. So here we are again. The black stallion is a true story of my horse, a black Trakehner stallion, his name Beatos. An intriguing story of his life with me, of the love that I had for him. Of his achievements and the adventure that we went on together. Covering his life with me. Telling about the filming of the advertisement for the famous bank, of his kidnapping. This is his story. Let me have your feedback, it all helps with the final verdict.

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As small river towns go, Adele Illinois is typical in many ways, right down to the haunted house at the end of Main Street. Not so typical are the stories that surround the house. Memories of a murder, untold grief and an undying love fill the heads of the residents old enough to remember a time when Adele was a thriving community. Meet the people of Adele, learn their secrets, hear their gossip and spend some time in this small backwater town along the Illinois River. Any feedback is welcome. I'm not as concerned about nits as I am about the content of this novel. It is actually a sequel to a novel I wrote in 2007 called 'Rory's Song' and I'm working hard to make it stand alone. Many thanks in advance!

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General comments and editorial feedback.

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What if? What if Peggy's letters had reached their destination? Would it have made a difference in the life she chose? Gentle reader, you decide. I'm brand new to this site! I'm loving it! Any and all feedback welcome. Thank you!

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A scene that takes place in an old-fashioned diner. Busy evening, short tempers, and a life-time of memories. I would love any feedback. Thanks!

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A short memory that waves hello every time I see this icon of our nation.

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Starting to really enjoy writing these. Once was shot point blank with a shot gun in the gut. Now that was a horror story...

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A volunteer for “Find a Grave”. I often receive requests from people looking for cemetery locations of relatives and acquaintances. Feedback most welcome

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This is just a combination of thoughts. Of memories that have in ways dictated who I am and how I perceive the world I live in. Memories or glimpses I remember. Not sure this is poetry or just sheer release of long held emotions

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This is a free form poem I wrote a number of years ago. The Title is Going Home, which unfortunately has already been used by someone else. Pay no attention to the (1). It was only added so the submissions page would accept it. Comments are welcomed.

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Is this a true Haiku?-you can tell me because I've never written one and I do know they can be complicated. Thanks and feedback welcome

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This is a memoir of my daughter's death and the communications we've had since her death. Since it is a true story, I want to know if it's readable and interesting.

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Memories of childhood past. Where peace but for a moment could be found. Any and all feedback is more than welcomed. This is was really rough and may still need work but hoping to learn if emotionally strong while not cutesy. Let me know your feelings. This is about a real willow tree at my "Big Mom's' home.. It was my sanctuary so many times.

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My concern with this is it is too predictable. Nothing original? Tried my best to make it my own as this one is personal though will come home to many who read it. Something good can come along and the past can threaten Any and all feedback.. It is written by me and through me as this one I actually sat down and created. May not be a great idea!! haaaaa My muse may not be amused!

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Memories prompted by sights, aromas sounds etc. I don't pick the subjects I write about. They pick me. Any and all feedback welcomed. I didn't punctuate on purpose. Simply don't like it in my own work 'most of the time'

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This will take more work to perfect. It is rather 'unfinished?' Can mean many things and about many people who have touched my life. It is actually about a real garden or a blend of gardens. My grandmothers and the movie the Secret Garden. Both touched me in ways I shall be forever changed by. Any and all feedback.

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Poem about nature, children, joy ... does it conjure up memories? Is it visual and easily understood? Does it read like a short story in its presentation? Any and all feedback

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Same overwritten poem about love and love lost. Old standby when a writer has an itch and needs it scratched! Any and all..feedback. Added punctuation but really don't like using it all the time in poetry. I like the use of ellipsis in voicing a pause.

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Christmas poem

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Again.. a lesson in how to take a simple item and see it differently than what it is. Perhaps stirring a memory for the reader of a beloved personal item. Hopefully so for this writer. Any technical and emotional feedback always welcomed.

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Lots of laughter is all that is needed.. This is based on FACTS HUMOR!! No sadness allowed!

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My first try at a real short story. Nervous? ha! Haven't a clue what I am doing! All feedback feared! I mean welcome. ha..

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Still working on older work. This doesn't rhyme as I have a problem in losing the power of it trying to rhyme. "Sorry Mom!" She made it look easy!! I am more interested in emotions evoked.

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tough_droubble. This is what I got from the picture. I see this olf fellow soaking up a memory, and wishing he had changed some things along the way, but using the memories to keep on going.

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Republished - With respect to things we cling to

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Mishmont deserves all the credit for this one. It was she that suggested something somber, and it was her comments about her husband Dave and his love of jazz that prompted this small tribute of sorts. Thanks Mishmont for inspiring me to write this. P.S. Michelle, I'll let you do the honor of giving this a proper title.

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When love is love until it isn't

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Simply put, this is an echo of my life. The words are exact, albeit put in "poetry form". I don't presume to tell you, the reader, anything. Just listen to YOUR heart!

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