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Not up to par but creativity needs priming so tried to catch the scene outside my living room window. How to say something that has been said so many times before. Any and all feedback.

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Any comments suggestions always appreciated

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Winter in the seventies. This was dragged out of an old closet and given a thorough scrubbing. I will be entering it in a local contest on winter tales so I'm limited to 400-500 words. I'm open to any comments...

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Autumn preparing for Winter.. I think this start strong and ends rather weak so will try working on it more. Working hard on rhythm and format. Nature and it wonderment yet oncoming chill and greyness. Any and all criticism is never taken for granted

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Vignettes from a childhood in northern British Columbia - Canada's most western province. Growing up with the fears of hospitalization tempered with the wonders of the Canadian outdoors and our northern winters. This as a collection of chronological essays or vignettes rather than a typical story with one chapter sliding seamlessly into the next. I believe this is the best way to present this overflowing album of snapshot memories I have bolstered with stories my parents have shared with me. Thanks to the help from TNBW reviewers I’ve chosen to rewrite the first handful of chapters before continuing on. I appreciate any comments you may have and I sincerely hope you enjoy the story.

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This is a memoir of my daughter's death and the communications we've had since her death. Since it is a true story, I want to know if it's readable and interesting.

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Nestled in the Vermont countryside, the Duncan family is lulled by the comforts of rural anonymity. Jillian Duncan, a widowed mom, is doing her best to raise her teenage sons. Unfortunately, her life drastically changes when her dog comes to their door and drops a finger on the doormat. The finger belongs to a neighbor, assumed a runaway months ago, when the girl disappeared during a blizzard. Before Jillian contacts police she uncovers a makeshift hangout in her basement dubbed by local teenagers as The Cheech Room. It smells of candles and puberty but reeks of a deadly secret that can't be kept. Jillian must decide whether reporting the girl's body, months after the case was closed, will destroy the only people she truly loves. Challenged by how far she'd go to protect her sons, Jillian attempts to put to rest a troubling secret from their distant past, while staying one step ahead of a detective bent on proving her boys involvement in the girl's disappearance. Swiftly, characters' layers peel away like onion skin and only in the end is the stinging core of truth revealed. Will it be too late to prevent another tragedy? Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance for your support.

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A few warm days brought about these observations. Comments welcome.

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Sometimes the forecast is wrong, but not this time. Two feet and rising here today. All comments welcome.

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A trek to the store after a snowstorm. Comments appreciated.

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I wrote this a while back but was reminded of it with today's storm, so here you go. Comments welcome.

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Another in the Nature Series which will soon be complete.

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