Content: urban fantasy

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It's Halloween, and Raiven Candrid and friends are taking on the dare of the century: Spend the night at the House. Stories say it's haunted, but that's not the half of it. Raiven must come to terms with her past and make the right decisions in moving forward. If not, the souls of the people she loves will be devoured. This place isn't just haunted, it's a house of gods. And they're waiting to be unleashed. ** This book is meant to be within the urban fantasy/thriller genres. Rated R because there is going to be profanity and vulgar content. Any type of feedback will be greatly appreciated. As far as character development, plot, descriptions, etc. Don't hold back, I have a thick skin! ;)

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In this urban fantasy setting refugees from a mystical world are transposed into a sprawling megalopolis on Earth filled with a seemingly delusional and naive populace of humans. What the humans are coining as new gang activity in the area, turns out to be much, much worse than what they had imagined possible. Four icons from a fantasy realm (a goblin, a half-dragon, a dark-elf, and a half-ogress) attempt to aid the humans as much as they can. But what can they do against a city filled with delusional crack-pots and greedy, deranged, blood-thirsty monsters from another world? The story is still a bit rough, but I'm putting it out there anyway to benefit from your review. While I'm grateful for suggestions on attaining mechanical precision, I'm more interested in whether the story flows well and keeps your interest. How is the dialog? Do you want to keep reading this story? Your feedback is appreciated!

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Young adult urban fantasy. There's something unusual about Christian, the new guy at school. As Jordan gets to know him better, and learns the reason he moved to her small town in the first place, she discovers that he is from the mysterious Celtic shadowland and that the magic of his world has brought the two of them together for a reason. Thanks to everyone who took time to read this. Your comments have been invaluable. As always I appreciate all feedback.

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Please, please, please start at the beginning. Sarah and Daphne have been friends since they were eight. Daphne, her best friend, doesn't know Sarah is a telepath. But when Sarah wrestles with the moral quandaries of what it means to steal the deepest secrets of those around her, Daphne keeps one of her own as she attempts to keep them both safe from the companies and sometimes religious cults attempting to harness Sarah's power. Any critiques are welcome.

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Tiamat Ashtad, or Tash as she is called, is thrown into the middle of a high profile kidnapping when the suspect targets her. She's got to reach inside and learn who she really is to rescue the children and save herself. I'm looking for feedback on everything. Don't worry about being gentle I've got thick skin. I do however ask that you respect myself and my characters. I'm here to learn and grow. :)

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PLACE: Chicago, Illinois / TIME: The Near Future--Cancer gone Pandemic is ravaging the world and only two psychic teenagers, the mysterious Kindred Clan, a brooding Immortal, and an Angelic being, can defeat the Pandemic, which it appears, is far more than a mere disease . . .

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(I'm currently in the process of revising. I can't decide where I want to end book one, so I'm going rewrite until I get there!) A kid from the inner-city finds out he AIN'T from the inner-city. He's the Hearth Tender, protector of the divine flame that fuels all life on Stargleam, a planet in the ninth realm. Before he can assume his duties, however, he must figure out a way to get home!

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