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A more authentic student perspective on the whole professor/student sexual fantasy.

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A pg version of this poem has been made into a video and is posted on Youtube at this link ---- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ceijq_z48Y4 ----- I had to water it down a bit for Youtube. So I renamed it By the Sea It would be super cool if you took a look at the video and left a comment on Youtube. Some people like the pg version better and some like this one - a comparison of the two would also be nice to know. Thanks in advance if you do go to Youtube. I will do several reviews of your writing in return if you subscribe to her channel or comment on the poem on Youtube. It takes quite a bit of work to do a video poem, and it's my friend's channel, so it would be nice to know if our idea on video poems is an idea worth continuing!

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I guess I'd like to know what do you think??! Too graphic??

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Entry in best pitch contest. Critical review is desired.

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I tend to write fairly graphic erotica, but posted some of my mild poems here in the erotica section because I wasn’t sure if I could post the way I usually write. I saw some graphitic work here so I got brave and I think I’m all right. It takes me a while after I write something to see the rough spots in the poem. I have only had this 4 or 5 days so I’m not sure yet what I need to change. I know it is a bit long, but with erotica that isn’t so bad. There is no wondering about the so deep meaning hidden in the poetic lines. This is a straight out story, bordering on porn. I usually try to have some story so it isn’t just about sex, even if the story part of the poem is brief. So is there any redeeming value in this poem and what are your general opinions. Is this poem, too graphic or is it arousing? Also comments about punctuation and style are also desired. thanks

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A weekend at one of South Florida’s hot spots where the lifestyle is definitely “anything goes”. Two women travel to Rooftop Hotel Resort to explore their desires for each other and for those who may wander into their life. The resort is real, and so are the stories!

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An erotic love poem about loving someone even past death. Detailed criticism encouraged

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Being immersed in each other regardless of others around you Critical feed back encouraged.

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*The asterisk is added because a similar title exists. Mysterious and strange - that altered space/time we occupy between ordinary consciousness and sleep. Review comments welcomed.

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Kelly had put herself on the auction block but when her boss starts bidding on her, what's a woman to do? Any feedback would be helpful. I'm kind of new to short fiction. Thanks for the feedback, it's been very helpful. This story's a work in progress so I appreciate it.

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It's a hot afternoon in the stable and Sierra thinks she's all by herself but is she really?

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Shelli anticipated another day of studying in the library but what awaited her there was nothing she could have ever anticipated.

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A story of manners: A father helps his daughter with her flatware choices. This is the same story I posted as a chapter of a memoir novel. I am posting it again as a short story because it is both short and I hope a story. I also posted it again to give those who reviewed the previous posting a chance to get a twofer. Copy and paste your previous review if you can't stomach reading it again. I did edit it slightly to make it better. If you are reading it and you find how I edited, I'll give you five stars the next time I review one of your stories.

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here in the uk we have a kinky undies and sex toy store that is also renowned for home parties...yes i hosted one recently...a good girlie night of wine, nibbles and giggles as we passed around the latest lingerie and varied collection of vibrant vibrators...beats watching tv any day i must say!

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I am experiencing many changes since Max died...sadness, heartbreak, loneliness I expected. But desire? I never once considered the vast separation imposed on the earthbound by the companion who has flown...I did not know there would be a struggle imposed by the separation of spirit from flesh...I feel my human-ness more than ever...

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a colection of short stories revolving around an online afair between a husband and wife and a lonely coledge student

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Responding to a comment made by a reviewer when I reviewed her piece on a similar subject, I have endeavoured to write a description of my penis. It is easy enough to use commonly accepted profanities, innuendos and euphemisms, but they offer no challenge to a writer and do not exploit the vast wealth of words, the currency of serious writers, that is the English language. I hope you enjoy my piece. No pun intended. well, perhaps a small one, and again, no pun intended.

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Let down by his girlfriend, Andy returned to the graveyard and enjoyed the best sex he would ever have in his life! Constructive criticism welcome. Don't pull your punches-give it to me straight. Well, on second thoughts, please be gentle.

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just finished this first draft, im sure its rough, but if people liek it i will take the time to polish it

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A publisher I'm working with asked if I would be interested in writing a short story for a collection of erotica. I've never written erotica before so I'm interested in any feedback you might have to offer. Thanks for reading

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My first attempt at erotic fiction, loosely based on an aactual encounter

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Hopefully you will still be able to leave feedback! Warning as this is explicit ... Z rated! Heat and more heat! Hold an ice cube in one hand and be ready to use it!

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After a night on the town, Tom and Gerry are full as boots. Gerry puts Tom to bed in his apartment and goes to Tom's apartment to sleep off the rest of the night in peace. In fact, the real charm of the night is only now about to begin. Please let me have any honest comment you like. If it appealed to your worst sexual fantasies, please tell me. If it left you as cold as an expedition might feel in Antarctica, please tell me that too. If you were just amused, that might be nice to know. Many thanks for whatever you may say.

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Okay - on to the next experiment! I haven't deliberately written a poem to conform to a shape before. This one would be much more effective if the letters inside the lip shape were red instead of black (in my opinion). Let me know what you think.

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Two young lovers learn the ropes. Honest and frank feedback of any kind will be most welcome.

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This is just some erotic writing I did for my wife's pleasure and would like some feedback before I submit some other erotica I have written.

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This is a new piece that is short and I hope sweet for erotica. I believe it could use some more character development but wanted to keep things short to get back into the game after a few months away from writing.

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Our "hero" is in hospital when his girl comes to visit him. From the healthy turmoil she creates, he is delivered by another who skilfully treats the existing incandescence and creates another combustion of her own.

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The narrator rings a beautiful young woman of his acquaintance and they arrange to spend a weekend together at a romantic spot on the south coast of New South Wales. The question is: will it prove to be a time for them to admire the ocean, the beach and the magnificent forested landscapes or will it turn out to be a "dirty weekend?"

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The exquisitely beautiful Angelica (Angie) is voyaging by great ocean-liner to rejoin her husband Jeremy (Jemmy) after five months' separation.

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A tropical vacation is suppose to be warm. Sometimes it can also be hot.

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Just tossing this out to see if there is enough interest for me to spend time developing the story. Do you care about any of the characters? Do you want more?

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