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This was my NANO book this year. It's rough. It's about a child kidnapping. I corrected the tense issues--or I think I did. If you find new tense issues, please tell me what line.

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Fourth in a series, following Siege of Jericho, Children of Nineveh and Whispers at the Wall, this sees Stilman Lind and Harry Wagener transitioning to private life, after the recent Presidential election. Lind is worried that the new President is completely unfit for the job, and that his new Cabinet is equally inept. But, worrying must be put aside for a strange new emerging problem.

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I'm back with yet another revamped version of Dark Angel. Any and all suggestions are welcomed. Thanks in advance.

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Newly titled rewrite of a novel workshopped on this site posted here for critical review of structure and credibility.

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When Mason Ward's father walks back into his life, a series of actions are set into motion which change Mason forever. Deception, betrayal and a chase across Europe - who's the real prize?

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A novel in three parts. An intense piece that runs the gammut of emotions. An odd mix of street and commercial fiction. A thriller yet a mystery and filled with poetry throughout the theme. A war of art. This is a modern day view of a Greek hero. Inspired by religious mind control cults. A cult.VEIL.Experiment.Justice. Mind Control. Conspiracy. Survival.

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After a hiatus of two novels, I'm bringing back my old protagonist, Jack Lansing. Jack has shucked his medical career completely now and become a full-time writer after the success of his first two novels. After meeting a man he knew back in his surgical residency days, murders begin popping up in and around his peaceful beach town. And amazingly, they point to him as the killer. Jack must convince the police and the FBI of his innocence, while he attempts to unearth the mystery himself - because, he realizes, he and his wife could be the next victims.

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Preacher's Blood was workshopped here a long time ago, and received well. The story failed in the outside world so i have reimaged it and am going to try posting it here again. I am looking for commentary on the characters, structure, plotting and, of course, grammar.

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