Dead Girls Never Shut Up

I have hard skin. I love criticism, lay in on me. Always looking for grammatical issues, cuts suggested to move the story along, POV errors, and tense issues. Thank you...

• Chapter 1 - One's real life is so often the life that one does not lead."(edited 5-10-10, Thanks Nat..."
• Chapter 2 - An image is a stop the mind makes between uncertainties."(edited 7-27-10, thanks Cat..."
• Chapter 3 - Most virtue is a demand for greater seduction."(edited 4-15-10, thanks Nat..."
• Chapter 4 - …in a world gone mad… yer so bad…"(edited 7-25-10, thanks Nat..."
• Chapter 5 - The pure and simple truth is rarely pure and never simple."(edited 8-9-10 thanks Natha..."
• Chapter 6 - It is a mistake to try to look too far ahead. The chain of destiny can only be grasped one link at a time."We get to see a little more..."
• Chapter 7 - Vanity working on a weak head, produces every sort of mischief."(Edited 6-24-10, thanks Cas..."
• Chapter 8 - I'm about to projectile express myself all over your Hush Puppies."(edit 8-12-10, thanks Natha..."
• Chapter 9 - Life is partly what we make it, and partly what it is made by the friends we choose."(edited 8-12-10, Thanks Kni..."
• Chapter 10 - We are not here on earth to change our destiny, but to fulfill it."(edited 4-28-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 11 - Everything is determined, the beginning as well as the end, by forces over which we have no control."(edited 4-28-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 12 - The only cure for vanity is laughter, and the only fault that is laughable is vanity."(Edit 5-2-10, thanks, Cat, ..."
• Chapter 13 - Lady justice wept tonight."(edited 4-17-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 14 - There is a charm about the forbidden that makes it unspeakably desirable."(edited 4-17-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 15 - Nothing is so hideous as an obsolete fashion."(edited 4-28-10, thanks Cat..."
• Chapter 16 - It is easier to stay out than get out."(edited 5-3-10, thanks Ann,..."
• Chapter 17 - Go on and wish that Brad Pitt would come along... But I'd prefer Madonna in a lacy thong..."(edited, 3-31-10, thanks Je..."
• Chapter 18 - I generally avoid temptation unless I can't resist it."(edited 7-25-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 19 - Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance."(edited 7-25-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 20 - And if she flees, soon will she follow, and if she does not take gifts, she will give, if she does not love, she will love despite herself... Sappho"7-25-10, thanks Jeanne and ..."
• Chapter 21 - If a bullet should enter my brain, let that bullet destroy every closet door."(edited 5-1-10, thanks Knig..."
• Chapter 22 - Keeping you a secret..."(ddited 5-11-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 23 - 'Tales from the Crypt'"(edited 1-3-11, thanks Rita..."
• Chapter 24 - Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul."(Edited 1-3-11, thanks Rita..."
• Chapter 25 - ...we can all agree that hate sucks..."Edited 1-3-11, thanks Rita ..."
• Chapter 26 - Choose the day and choose the sign of your day..."(edited 1-3-11, thanks Rita..."
• Chapter 27 - Enthusiasm is the most important thing in life."(Edited 1-3-11, thanks Rita..."
• Chapter 28 - The basis of optimism is sheer terror."(edited 2-11-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 29 - What is straight? A line can be straight, or a street, but the human heart, oh, no, it's curved like a road through mountains."(edited 1-17-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 30 - We're all of us sentenced to solitary confinement inside our skins for life."(edited 5-1-10, thanks Ann ..."
• Chapter 31 - Mistakes are the portals of discovery."(edited 5-20-11, thanks Rit..."
• Chapter 32 - A woman makes her own end; she must embrace her true spirit and be what nature has intended of her, in matters of love and otherwise."(edited 1-3-11, thanks Casp..."
• Chapter 33 - I've sacrificed everything, only to be shanghaied by the bi-curious machinations of a cabal of doughy, misshapen teens."(edited 3-20-10, thanks Ann..."
• Chapter 34 - Looking at yourself in a mirror isn't exactly a study of life."(edited 5-1-10, thanks Jean..."
• Chapter 35 - Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation."(edited 3-22-10, thanks Jea..."
• Chapter 36 - What is gotten over the Devils back, is spent under his belly."(Edited 3-22-10, thanks Jea..."
• Chapter 37 - Experience is a brutal teacher but you learn--my God do you learn."(edited 3-22-10, thanks Jea..."
• Chapter 38 - If I am what I have, and if I lose what I have, who then am I?"(edited, 7-25-10, thanks Na..."
• Chapter 99 - Query for Dead Girls Never Shut Up"Okay, another try at this q..."